The story it self is riveting but i think the author failed in some obvious areas for not thinking that issue she created can be solved immediate. The mention that they are the powerful family in the NY and LA is enough to overturn any hurdles and circumstance. If its base in the real world, if you have money you have connections, and with those connections that are purely loyal because of your money is the main ingredient of staying in power. Not to spill anything. Just an example, you are the head of a conglomerate and in the novel the only top official the most powerful family can talk to is just a Captain of the Police force? If Maybe the writer should explore more on the meaning of Power. Take those Kdramas with Filthy rich family storyline. Politics is politics which ever country you are in. Regardless if this is NY or Asian. The principle is the same. All the issues in the novel are very easy to resolve because of that Power. Which the writer failed to write about. The Power she kept mentioning are just words not totally in action. I knoe you have to put drama into it to spice it up. But when you do make sure to follow the string of succession and not just extending the scenes just to have 3000 words per episode. I like the story, very relatable and aspiring. I just hope that the author can enhance the story or edit if that possible or anyone who have the knowledge to re-write to make it cohesive and tighten a bit would make the story more and more exciting.