FIRST CHAPTER
This first installment of the series did not completely convince me.
The story was interesting but it has a lot of holes, it's very fast and the characters don't have time to develop. I find their story beautiful but very superficial, I would have preferred to see it develop in a different and more truthful way.
Too bad, because it could have developed much better.
SECOND CHAPTER Chapter two has definitely improved the story. The two protagonists have a good story, they are beautiful together and have a nice chemistry between them. I appreciate that there are no big plot holes and that there is a development in their personalities. They literally grew up and understood their mistakes so they could have a better relationship.
THIRD CHAPTER In this third chapter we have a nice story but not as nice as that of the second chapter. I liked the protagonists even if I did not find the story very original and in some places there were passages a little too fast. I would have liked to see more of their relationship but I appreciate how there has been a development of the characters.
Overall all three chapters were interesting but they certainly understood from the mistakes of the first and improved. Surely the second story is the one written better while the first is the one written worse.
The story was interesting but it has a lot of holes, it's very fast and the characters don't have time to develop. I find their story beautiful but very superficial, I would have preferred to see it develop in a different and more truthful way.
Too bad, because it could have developed much better.
SECOND CHAPTER Chapter two has definitely improved the story. The two protagonists have a good story, they are beautiful together and have a nice chemistry between them. I appreciate that there are no big plot holes and that there is a development in their personalities. They literally grew up and understood their mistakes so they could have a better relationship.
THIRD CHAPTER In this third chapter we have a nice story but not as nice as that of the second chapter. I liked the protagonists even if I did not find the story very original and in some places there were passages a little too fast. I would have liked to see more of their relationship but I appreciate how there has been a development of the characters.
Overall all three chapters were interesting but they certainly understood from the mistakes of the first and improved. Surely the second story is the one written better while the first is the one written worse.
