The direction and writing are all over the place.
The vampire scenes are the worst. Why would a vampire dress up and a cocktail dress all the time and moving at a snails pace like some foolish runway model? It's embarrassing and corny! The sultriness makes you want to vomit. Secondly....why waste time watching her kill people? She's a vampire...duh we know that. If this was a romance without vampires is it necessary to follow the lead to her job everyday? No?
Great concept poor screenwriting.
Rewrite it and make it REAL!
Wtf with that doctors office??? Geesh!!! Sooo many added scenes that needed to be on editing room floor.
The vampire scenes are the worst. Why would a vampire dress up and a cocktail dress all the time and moving at a snails pace like some foolish runway model? It's embarrassing and corny! The sultriness makes you want to vomit. Secondly....why waste time watching her kill people? She's a vampire...duh we know that. If this was a romance without vampires is it necessary to follow the lead to her job everyday? No?
Great concept poor screenwriting.
Rewrite it and make it REAL!
Wtf with that doctors office??? Geesh!!! Sooo many added scenes that needed to be on editing room floor.